Persuasive Paper

Dear Mr. Brink

I am writing to request a promotion. My responsibilities have grown significantly since I was hired two years ago, and I believe that this fact and the quality of my work warrant a raise.

My current position is Foreman; however, for the last year I have been performing all of the duties of a Field Manager without having the job title or, of course, being paid commensurate with it. My responsibilities and achievements that call for a promotion include:

  • Innovating a dig-less re-piping system
  • Maintaining customer relations with potential customers
  • Attaining my Master Plumber certification
  • Developed a more efficient customer feedback system which has helped our brand image

Based on the feedback that I have received, I believe that you and your manager think I have been performing excellently the duties of this higher position. I expect that you will give my request all due consideration as soon as possible.

I look forward to hearing from you.





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